Here’s the beginning of a story. You must add at least 3 sentences onto it. Good Luck!
The boy woke up in the middle of the night. As he rubbed his still-sleep-filled eyes, a weird glow appeared, along with music and a strange clicking sound. Only when he put his glasses on, did he see the source of the weirdness. It was his ipod, and it was standing in front of him. It had two arms and two legs. “Greetings!” it said.
To be continued…
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Laura
// Feb 19, 2007 at 9:37 pm
The boy woke up in the middle of the night. As he rubbed his still-sleep-filled eyes, a weird glow appeared, along with music and a strange clicking sound. The clicking sound was like when your clicking a mouse. Only when he put his glasses on, did he see the source of the weirdness. It was his ipod, and it was standing in front of him. It had two arms and two legs. “Greetings!” it said. The boy was very freaked out now. He thought he was dreaming , so he pinched himself. But it hurt so he must of been awake !! So he closed his eyes but the ipod was still there, but except of arms and legs in the right spots he had them all over his body. Finally the boy realized he was hulusinating.When his mom asked him if he was all right. So the boy didn’t see his ipod anymore. Instead his mom was coverd in hair. But the boy didn”t fall for that because it was hallowen. So the boy never did se the ipod with arms and legs all overit, theipod with 2 arms, 2legs. But his mom did keep the hiry costume!!
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Mr. G
// Feb 20, 2007 at 7:41 am
Well done Laura! Very clever!
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Laura
// Feb 20, 2007 at 9:25 pm
Thakyou Mr.G
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Asia
// Feb 21, 2007 at 8:02 am
The boy woke up in the middle of the night. As he rubbed his still-sleep-filled eyes, a weird glow appeared, along with music and a strange clicking sound. Only when he put his glasses on, did he see the source of the weirdness. It was his ipod, and it was standing in front of him. It had two arms and two legs. “Greetings!” it said. He rubbed his eyes again, to make sure he was actually seeing the iPod. He actually was seeing the iPod, the poor kid was sure of that. So, he went over to it, and played his favorite song. The iPod actually sang the song (not a very good voice though)! The boy then got really freaked out. His favorite song was by a high-pitched girl, and this iPod was a low-voiced GUY. He was amzed that he didn’t think of this before, but, anyway, he went to the back of the iPod and took the batteries out. So then he could get back to his sleep….or can he? (The boy didn’t see this next part, as he was sleeping. Okay? Okay.)
Another creature came into his room, followed by hundreds more. They looked like CDs and Radios with arms and legs…Slowly, the Radio put the batteries back in to the iPod and crept away to ruin another child’s rest.
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Matthew
// Feb 21, 2007 at 9:46 am
Mr.G that would be weard but breaty cool because if he wanted a frend than there his time to get one.But that is weard how about the one I made.Here something for you Mr.G how about you say something likeyou will have a contest on whow can make a good THINK ABOUT IT and give them about 2 weeks.
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Joey (Ryan's brother)
// Feb 21, 2007 at 8:35 pm
Then his ipod said, ‘’select a song.” He picked a song, and then his ipod said “click menu” then “click party.” All of a sudden disco lights came down from the ceiling. Then all my friends ran into the room, and there was a big party!
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Hannah
// Feb 24, 2007 at 8:23 pm
I think it would be cool to have an ipod with arms and legs.
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Vito :-)
// Feb 26, 2007 at 12:41 pm
“Greetings,” it said as the boy sat as still as a statue. The Ipod started moving towored the boy. The boy still in shock told himself that this was just a dream, but suprisingly it wasn’t. The Ipod jumed into the boy’s palm and asked the boy where it was. The boy exclaimed that he was in Pennsylvania. The Ipod looked confused and said,”That is strange, I am supposed to be on the planet Ipodro. How did I end up on the planet Earth? Oh well, I better live it up on Earth for now. Then the Ipod started getting silent, it’s face was turning solid, and it was now a reguler Ipod. Then finnaly the boy went back to sleep, and had a new Ipod. THE END!
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Hayley Chamberlin
// Mar 7, 2007 at 10:00 am
“Greetings.” That is what my Blue skinned Ipod said to me when I woke up. I did not really care about a talking Ipod. So I got up grabed my talking Ipod.That little blue skinned Ipod kept on yelling in my ear instead of Radio Disney. When I got home I told my mom what happend and this is what she said ” A talking Ipod you are nuts.”
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